CaitE Baloney

Hey there Wolfy, I'm Cait and I liked where you are going with this. I am usually not into reading vampirish stories but your story kind of intrigued me. I ...

Hi there. My name is Cait and I thought that your prologue was quite good. It does everything that it is supposed to, tell the reader a story and have ...

Hey there, my name is Cait and I have the pleasure to review your story. Overall I thought that it was very good and the story itself is very captivating. ...

Ok that was awesome. I have to say I was a bit skeptical when I began reading it but you pulled me in right away. I liked the way that ...

I really enjoyed this chapter. I think that you leave off at a great point because I want to keep reading so badly. This is good that you keep us ...

Hey, I really enjoyed reading this. I love your idea but my only thing about it was it seems to be a bit rushed. We didn't really get a good ...

I really enjoyed reading that. Probably what caught me up in it was your diction which was different but I liked it. I also enjoyed the detail that you put ...

Hey there Foxfire, my name is Cait, and I enjoyed reading your story for the most part. Like WD I felt that you did not give us enough insight into ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I wasn't expecting it to be as good as it was seeing as there are so many Cinderella stories and many of them do not ...

I really like this story more and more as I read it. Nothing has sparked my interest like your story in a while for me. I like how you opened ...

Hey, It seems that everyone has already critiqued this but I would just like to say that I really enjoyed this. I think that the very end (when she rips ...

Hey there, my name is Cait and I will be reviewing your story, Over all I think that you did a good job. It was a intriguing short story that ...

This is definitely a great chapter. It is not hard to follow although I do hope that you go more in depth about the main characters background so readers will ...

I liked it and want to read more. You did a great job writing it I think that it catches the attention of the reader well but as ANate145 said ...

You really should not be nervous because this was really good. I really wish you had posted more, as everyone else said. Also you should find a title for it. ...